ffsak;fjsklajfaslk;jfklsa SO HAPPY TO SEE THIS~ The consistency is amazing. The art is great. The story is wonderful. I LOVE that panel looking down on Arthur on the first page. You did really well with the perspective. And Arthur's boot smashing the cigarette out was great. I really felt like he was stamping it out with all his force.
I'm really happy that Rockets is more of the emotional relation between the two, rather than physical. Sometimes this kind of thing just goes physical really quickly, but man, 7 chapters...and then finally a real romantic physical contact. Kept us waiting, which almost made reading it better. Go graduate!
I need to tell you how much I loved this >w< The paneling was so well set up, my eyes easily flew threw the strip with great ease! Some artists do a bit of tricky paneling, but yours was fanomanol Gahhh~you have no idea the squeky shriek I made when I saw this in my inbox >w< I was literally bouncing in my chair while I read it I really love how the story developed so, so believably! No deus ex machina, or anything <3 ^w^ I was thinking briefly to myself, how would she wrap it up in two parts? Then BAM~<3 >w< Geting ranty, sorry, thank you for posting, really brightened up my night
Also~~I love how the relationship isn't based purely on the physical! You really know how to develop the emotional bond between the two characters, ohh~I can't wait for you to post again cx
The consistancy is amazing too!! And this is just silly, but I love Arthur's boot when he's stamping out his cigarette <3 ^w^ Ohh~another silly bit, the fence, gate thingy~~it was this dark black that paneled behind him, and I just thought it looked pretty ^w^